Another track is up. This one is almost a full song in structure.

I may call it "The Iron Lion".

Again, a rough-ish mix on not very good equipment, but damn, it's fun to do this stuff.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZSZyJfvCHYc

Check it out, lemme know what you think!

not bad, i like it
what about solos?

I'm no lead guitarist. I've gotta outsource some solos, lol.

I'm gonna learn lead work though. And for sure I'll look to Andreas, Jackson B, Page Hamilton of Helmet and Josh Homme and their respective individual work to point me in the direction I want to go.

The only leads I can pull off are strained distortion-fests that break apart with partially intended dissonance... and then they pull themselves together somehow. They at least sound like I'm trying, like there's passion, like the guitar and strings are about to break from the tension... but need more accuracy and mood.

Do you feel that the three recordings I've done and posted lately have some consistency?

yeah, add the lead work if it's possible

hm, i don't know really if there's some consistency but i see u did the songs with the same mood, u know...